愛薇塔樂學英文

心得分享:感悟託福作文是寫給全世界看的

   今天，我反復研究了一篇ets託福的6分作文，給我最深的感受就是任何一篇ets打上了6分的作文，應該都是可以傳到世界上每一個考託福角落的考生手上的作文，"它"經得起時間的考驗，基本上經得起每一個託福考生的考驗，基本上過得了每一個託福研究機構的眼睛。它所要做到的，如果讓我用兩個字來概括它的內涵，讓我想起的是“中庸”二字。

今天，ets要我寫“音樂反應中國文化”的論題，我的心有點震撼.....因為在這麼短的時間，這麼少的字，要表現這麼一個深刻的主題，是不容易的。我想把我今天寫的這篇文章先交給我的母校--武漢大學的這塊小小的論壇板塊上的學友看看，看看能否經得起同學們的眼睛。因為我想，我們gter在寫託福作文的時候，ets是通過我們來瞭解我們，不但我們的寫作水準，還瞭解我們這個人，另外的，通過千千萬萬對於這個論題寫作的中國學生來看我們的民族，來瞭解我們的文化，同時增長ets本身的見識和水準。另外，ets還可能要把你的6分作文傳到世界上所有考託福的考生的手上，經起全球gter的考驗，你所反映的民族文化會影響看到所有看你作文的人。所以，我本人也不敢馬虎。在這裏，我先拿出的是自己的作文。接著的是ets的參考6分作文。我想,這兩篇作文的距離到底有多遠呢？我的英語水準很差，能力也非常有限，請各位學兄，學姐，學弟，學妹傾情指教。

ets是這樣平靜而有深度的提問的“Music tells us something about a culture.What does the music of your country reveal about of your country?Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.”

答：

It is very lucky for me to introduce the music of our motherland,china,to the friends who come from different parts of the world.The topic about the relationships between the music and our culture is so large for me to reveal its deep and gorgeous personality in such a short essay ,for that our motherland has such a long history ,has so many different areas,and so many people.And different area has different styleof music in different stage of her history.But in our heart,one point is certain:we have a common motherland:China.

In different stage of this ancient civilized country,she conceives different musics,and these musics correspond to different cultures.Among all of these musicics,what I would like to introduce to you is the classical music which is performanced by zheng,a Chinese zither with 25strings，because in the ancient time ,the great thinker Confucius said 'music is used to teach people of the country'And he supported that music which is on the same way of nature fits everyone in every different stage of history.It traverses history and transcends boundaries between different countries .Zheng,for example,if you have opportunity to listen to its music,you may hear nature.You may feel that you are talking to nature.You can hear the blossoming of flowers,the flowing of rivulet,the rolling of tides to deep sea .You can see the working of honest people and the love of nature that comes from your deep heart.Listen hard,then you see the great heros living in history;the splendor of this glebe;the smiles of the beauties....then you appreceive the grandness of the deep culture of this ancient country.This is the verve of these 25strings :simple,plain,ordinary ,but its charm is vast,deep,gorgeous,and distant.It is possible that every people who has once felt it would never forget it as you never forget the beauty of nature and the personality of yourself.The charm of the music ,just as you listen to it.When you feel it,you can touch the heart of its deep culture.I don't know if I could change the topic a little"Music tells us much about a culture".To learn its culture,you had better listen to its music first.