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　　Task1：　　Large tree grows just near your house， producing troubles for you. Write a letter to lo

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　　Task1：

　　Large tree grows just near your house， producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem， discuss the ways of its resolution and make enquiries about financial aspect.

　　To： mr. S. Brown，

　　local authority org.

　　35， Willow av.，

　　Greencity， Russia.

　　Tel：（812） 345-46-76

　　Fax： 534-87-78

　　Telex：（812） 657-78-89

　　e-mail： local_authority@net

　　From： Helen Apple，

　　13， Willow Av.，

　　Greencity， Russia.

　　Tel：（812） 345-46-70

　　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you to apply for a big tree located just near my house. This tree really troubles me. The fact is that the tree stands in sun's light and because of that a close-fitting room is too dark and gloomy. Also I must tell you we use that room as a nursery. Our son is only two months old and is still weak. As to me， I am his mother and I must be sure that I do my best to take care of him. But the tree doesn't let my son to receive enough sunlight and I am pushed to ask you to solve this problem.

　　I would welcome the sooner opportunity to meet with you to discuss the subject. I hope the tree has to be out. To tell the truth the tree is quite old and can fall down any time and I can't imagine that crash may happen.

　　While I am waiting for your decision， I hope that I am allowed to put away branches which directly cover the window. If I am allowed to do it， just call me as soon as possible and tell about it.

　　Addly， I want to know how much the cutting of the tree may cost and who must pay it. And which part of the payment our family has to pay. Also， I am interesting in possible discounts.

　　I will appreciate your prompt reply.

　　Yours faithfully， mrs. Apply.

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