愛薇塔樂學英文

1、不要再用 more and more了；該片語被評為中國惡俗片語榜第一！！老師說可以用a growing number of..

2、inevitable——不可避免

3、should/would/could/may/might；為什麼要用這個5個詞？首先，語氣比較委婉，不會很肯定，顯的謙虛；其次，可以不考慮動詞的形式；所以這五個詞被稱為最賤的詞。

4、physically beneficial——身體健康；副詞+形容詞的表達方式，比較好看。

5、worldwide/globly/internationally famous——舉世聞名

7、開頭方法一：

Background

Controversy (2 different/opposite ideas)

As/Being a controversial issue....      作為有爭議的問題....

Now days， the issue on....is highly debatable， and ideas vary from person to person——不同的人有不同的觀點。（不要用different people）

Some would claim....，while some others may suggest....—— 一些人認為....另一些人認為....

Some would claim....，while the idea....is still held by some others. ——Idea倒裝，句子更好看。不能用

some或者the other，這樣只有兩種可能性，太絕對。

8、5個常用單詞的替代
Think → claim / suggest / believe / advocate / maintain / suppose
Good → beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positive
Bad → harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negative
Advantage → merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro
Disadvantage → demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con / cost

9、few 0-1 幾乎沒有

A few 一些，不多 <5

Several 若干 <10

10、贊成某個觀點

As for me，I side with the fomer/latter

中立觀點

As far as I am concerned, I believe both views have their own merits and con coexit

11、like a double-edged sword 雙刃劍

12、sth. can be neither absolutely perfect nor purely harmful

13、末段（總結）

All in all/to conclude/in conclusion/in general/ to sum up

When all the above-mentioned factors are taken into consideration, a conclusion could be drawn that … (主要用來湊字數)

14、On one hand.... contribute greatly to....On the other hand/On the contrary

15、in contrast，the demerits of....can not be ignored.

16、作文重點，其實就是不能重複；不要用一些惡俗的詞，people等；少用第一和第二人稱；多變幻句式；少用主動句；注意符號