TOEFL福作文是寫給全世界看的(2)

  我本人對我的作文的評價是內容不夠簡潔,用詞不夠精確,句勢還不夠恰當,寫作速度太慢,考試要吃虧的其中,為了做到賞心悅目,讓沒有聽到過的古箏的人對它發生好奇,我沒有把金山詞霸上面對古箏的解釋中“with 25 strings”去掉.
  下面是我看了許多遍,也抄了許多遍的ets範文,同時,也為這篇範文的魅力深深感染Insgroupsto answer the question, "what does the music of your country reveal about the culture of your country?" I would like to introduce myself. I am from Spain, I was born in a region called Catalonia, concretely in a town near Barcelona.

  In my opinion, the music tells us a lot of a culture, and someone could learn a lot from the spanish culture just listening to music in her room. But it is not easy to collect a representative sample of the spanish music, because of the enormous variety, every region of Spain has its own music, that sounds com pletely different from the rest, and even for some regions there are more than one type of tipical music. This variety is very important because shows that Spain is a counry of countries, each one with a particular personality.

  It is very interesting to discover the different personality of the spanish regions, just listening how their music sounds like. For example, in the south of Spain people are known for being very funny and for their good sense of humor. In this part of Spain you can find mainly two kinds of music: the Flamenco and the Sevillanas. Sevillas have completly the personality of andalusian people, it is very cheerful. However, Flamenco sounds sad and deep. The reason is that although andalusian people have a good mood, they live in one of the poor est part of Spain, and they express their pain through the flamenco music.

  Finally, I would like to say that I personally agree with the statement that music tells us something about a culture, and with my example example I wanted to illustrate, how much of the culture of a country it is possible to learn just listening to its music.

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